I Can Do It…
In the 3rd version script, I use colors to mark UI elements, users controlling actions, when the scenery changes。
Users interactivity are highlighted by UI elemtents.
Description
This part of the story is from Line1 A3.
Ali went back home and the ginger man told him the truth.
Previously on Line1：The greedy boatman accused Ali of killing GM, and ALI was taken to prison. In prison, Ali was chosen to join the team that killed the giants. By a strange accident Ali succeeded in killing a giant for which he felt guilty. Soon after, Ali was exonerated and released.
Viewers play as Ali in this experience.
// [position] UI hints description
// [Button] motion description
// Scene View Change
Outside House, when Ali came back
EXT – DAY OUTSIDE OF ALI’S HOUSE
Even though it was daytime, the scene still looks like night time because of the huge black sky dome. Ali arrived at his house. We can see the scenery around the house.
Ali saw the ginger man sitting on his doorstep. As Ali getting closer, the ginger man noticed him.
GINGER MAN
(stands up, seems happy)
Oh! You’re back! I’ve been waiting for you for 4 hours.
You should welcome me.
I’m still standing in front of you.
You see, a complete and healthy man.
Take me inside, I’ll tell you what happened.
// [Near the door] Open The Door
// [grip] Grab the door handle, rotate wrist, and pull the door open.
Ali entered the door, the ginger man followed him.
Inside House
INT – DAY LIVINGROOM
Ali and ginger man got into the house. The house was dusty，the plants withered. Ali opened the windows, patted the dust off the chairs. Ginger man sat on the sofa.
// Viewers can walk around in the living room
// [When getting close to chairs] Pat the chair
// [grip] holding grip button and move hand slightly
// [Near the window] Open the Window
// [grip] grab window handle and push to open it.
GINGER MAN
I guess, you don’t want to see me. hahaha.
The less you want something to happen the more likely it is to happen.
(walked to the sofa and sat down)
Yeah, I’m really sorry.
I’ve always been alive. I never blamed you. I’m really happy that you come back safely.
Those giants didn’t hurt you right?
Balcony
INT – DAY BALCONY
Ginger man walked to the balcony.
GINGER MAN
Come here.
(Ginger man asks viewer to go to the balcony. )
Outside the balcony, the city was still brightly lit and gorgeous, even though it had been out of the sun for months.
GINGER MAN
What a lovely city.
That day, when I leave your house, I went to the river, take a boat home.
//The surrounding environment began to change,
it was no longer a city, but outside of Ali’s house, Ali and ginger man was saying goodbye to each other.
// The view changed to riverside.
There was a boat on the river with 2 people on it, one is boatman, another is ginger man.
GINGER MAN
I had a very happy chat with the boatman. The boatman said that my basket and silk are very beautiful and wanted to buy them. So I agreed.
When I was leaving the boat, something floated on the river. It was a corpse.
// The river fades out, a street appears.
The boatman took my basket, silk and the corpse find you, told you I was dead.
He asked for money from you.
// Scenery outside turn into police station.
Then, he went to the police station, reported you ,
received the rich man’s bounty.
You were taken to prison, and you would definitely be chosen to go to the giant’s house
// The scenery outside the balcony restored to its previous appearance.
A short silence.
GINGER MAN
Almost forgot! I brought you some snacks.
Ginger man walked to the living room.
Suddenly, someone outside the house shouted:
What’s that! What’s that!
Ali and ginger man looked outside, in the distance, there was a huge beam of light shooting into the sky.